Tell us about his hair or eyes. I really like that the administrator is Mr. Gray. What's up with the few people clapping - thought provoking detail. Are all the women or just these few destined to be housewives? These are rich kids who are going to have a gardener?
I'm going to put this in the book, so let me know if you have any edits.
Bonnie,
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Tell us about his hair or eyes. I really like that the administrator is Mr. Gray. What's up with the few people clapping - thought provoking detail. Are all the women or just these few destined to be housewives? These are rich kids who are going to have a gardener?
I'm going to put this in the book, so let me know if you have any edits.